Honest Love.

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By Literature Fairy


I am impatient sometimes.

But I love you.

Sometimes I talk too much;
and sometimes I think too much;
and sometimes
I talk too much about what I think.

But I love you.


Sometimes I dream too much, and too specifically.

And I know that this annoys you.

But I love you.

Sometimes I make too many plans, I can't just allow things to happen
spontaneously 
the way you do.

But I love you.

And you know that I do.


I am who I am, I am not perfect.

But you love me for me, and I love you for loving me.

You bite your nails, and you don't make plans, and you spend far too much time on the playstation.

But I love you.

And I always will.

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poetvix Level 7 Commenter 19 months ago

Like it! It is very honest and straight forward yet beautiful at the same time. Way to go.

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Literature Fairy Hub Author 19 months ago

Thank you! I wasn't sure about this one myself. :)

TattoGuy 19 months ago

I am Who I am, well you know I love that line and a great poem LF, nice to have you back and writing !

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attemptedhumour Level 5 Commenter 19 months ago

What a lovely simple but effective poem. Your personality is ingrained into the words and i loved reading this. Cheers from Oz

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leni sands Level 5 Commenter 19 months ago

I, too, like this one. Keep up this great writing.

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nikitha p 19 months ago

Nice poem! I liked it.

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Mark Bronze Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago

A really nice love poem. Thank you.

shygirl2 19 months ago

Love this poem, as I am a romantic at heart!

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Eiddwen 18 months ago

Hi Literature Fairy,

A brilliant poem, thank you so much for sharing.

I have only just come accross you on here and I am now looking forward to reading more of your work.

Take care.

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Loveslove 16 months ago

Love it !!

peterdros 9 months ago

Nice. I like the part with the playstation!

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Literature Fairy Hub Author 9 months ago

Thanks all for the comment's! LF x

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Silent Sinner Level 2 Commenter 7 months ago

Simply beautiful.

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sweetguide Level 3 Commenter 2 months ago

Hi, Another great Hub. A beautiful Poem

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